2015届各地名校模拟试题短文改错题汇总

【答案】【知识点】

【答案解析】

第二行：1.时态：go→ went前后时态一致。2.代词误用：ours→our.这里要用our作定语。而ours则不能作定语。

第三行：3.删掉so,前一分句为as soon as 引导的时间状语从句，主句前再不需要连词。4. 介词误用Before→After根据题意是等了半个小时以后，而不是以前。故用After.

第四行：5.副词误用:impatiently→impient这里是形容词和前面的get形成系表结构。6.连词误用：and→but根据句意需要转折，而不是顺承。

第五行：7.主谓一致误用： were→ was there be 句型中be 和最近的名词保持一致。8.fish前加a.根据题意这里是钓了一条鱼及根据fish后的was,故在此加a.

第六行：9.名词复数误用：minute→minutes few修饰的名词要用复数形式。

10.非谓语误用：Felt→Feeling根据句意，feel 和句子主语之间是主动关系而非被动关系

【英语卷（解析）·2015届河北省衡水中学高三上学期五调考试（201412）word版】第一节：短文改错。

Dear Editor,

I used to be a physician in the children’s department of a hospital. Form time to time I treated children who had poisoned by medicine with older family members. The children didn’t know the medicine was danger ; they just knew it tasted sweet. Children easily open the bottle what we now use in China.

Some days before I talked about medicines with an American. He showed me a sort of plastic bottle. The design was quite simple and I’m sure our Chinese factories could produce these bottles. The top of the bottle can be opened by pressing down on them while turning. This is difficult for most young children to do so , though grown-up can open these bottles very easily.

I’m certainly that the expense of making such tops would be very small. As a doctor , I’d love to see this doing. And most parents would be grateful.

Sincerely yours

Li Hua

【答案】【知识点】

【文章综述】本文讲述作者是名医生对于孩子误食大人药物造成中毒感到很痛心，与美国交流后得知有一种瓶盖可以完全避免这种情况的出现，故写信给编辑呼吁尽快实施。

【答案解析】

had 后面加been   考查被动语态。Be poisoned by 被。。所毒害。

with—for         考查介词。句意：时不时，我会收治那些被大人的药所误食中毒的孩子。

danger—dangerous  考查形容词。句意：孩子们不知道这是危险的；

what ---that/which/去掉what 考查宾语从句。the bottle做先行词，定语从句we now use in China缺少宾语故用that/which或者把之省略；

before—ago       考查副词。句意：许多天后我， 我与美国人谈论此事；

them—it          考查代词。句意：瓶子的顶部只有用力按压旋转才能打开。