高考英语作文无话可写怎么破


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发布时间:2017-05-11 08:55:00
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内容提要:不要信口开河,更不能够信马由缰、乱加一气,最终偏离主题,给阅卷老师留下“该写的不写,不该写的写得过多”的不良印象。

补加语句,充实文章

根据作文的行文走向,适当增加一些与主题相关的语句,或根据作文题目中提示的要点,恰如其分地衍生出一些句子,即能够起到前引后联的作用,又可以补充一些相关信息,帮助读者理解所写内容。此外,还可以起到协调句式,避免单调的作用。

2 假定你是李华,你的朋友汤姆得知中国学生数学成绩总体优于英国学生,所以他想知道中国数学教与学的情况,请你写一封邮件回复他。要点如下:课堂学习时间;作业量;课外学习等。

要点拓展如下:

1. 课堂学习时间

A special Chinese high school student usually has seven math classes per week and some schools even offer nine classes for math in which teachers often address key points and most common problems they’ve found in students’ homework handed in recently.

2. 作业量

Due to teachers’ immediately feedback on their homework the majority of the students are able to have a good command of their learning materials even though the workload is quite huge.

3. 课外学习

Besides homework some students also manage to spend extra time reviewing what they’ve learned in class and get their notes organized. The revision style varies but there is a common belief among students that math is of great importance. As a result they devote quantities of time to it.

点评:该作文题所给提示并不多。在完成该作文前,同学们要考虑以下几个问题:

1. 课堂学习时间是多还是少?每周有多少节课?

2. 作业量是大还是小?每天有多少?

3. 课外学生都有哪些课外活动来学习数学?

通过有针对性地对目标进行分析,我们要为自己的作文找到拓展的方向。前文中画线部分均为结合文章发展走向衍生出的句子,所添加的句子在句式结构上也不尽相同。

此外,我们还可以根据实际情况添加一两句名言警句来点缀文章,使评分再上一个档次。

3 Were I three years younger than I am now I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward.

点评:Living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. 这个句子尽管结构并不复杂,属于结构,但该句采用了类比这一修辞手法,将无目标的生活比作无指南针的航海,顿时使人生目标形象起来。


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