高考英语读后续写技巧：以2021年高考真题为例

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读后续写技巧

1　寻找四条主线·深度挖掘续写基点

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE

The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.

The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.

Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.

注意:续写词数应为150左右。

As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.

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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.

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写作示例

Step 1: 浏览前文,摸清文章关键要素,并归纳主旨。

要素	描述	主旨
when	Mother’s Day	本文以母亲节为线索展开,讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐,自己动手做起早餐来,但不幸的是,他们接连失败,后来在父亲的帮助下获得成功,他们把早餐献给亲爱的母亲,母亲非常感动的故事。
where	At home
who	The twins—Jeff and Jenna
what	The pair prepared breakfast for their mother.
why	They wanted to give their mother a surprise.

Step 2: 梳理“四条线索”,预测续写内容。

文段	线索	文脉线索
前文	时间线	Before Mother’s Day→Mother’s Day: at 6 a.m.
	空间线	in the kitchen
	情感线	excited→disappointed
	故事线	First, they boiled the porridge.→Next, they made the French toast. →A slice of bread turned black.→Then they found the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. →The other piece of bread turned black, too.
续写预测	1.They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. 2.Their mother was surprised to find the breakfast cooked by Jeff and Jenna.

Step 3:借助开头,确定续写段落梗概。

段落	续写第一段
开头	As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
梗概	Their father helped them adjust the fire and they prepared breakfast successfully. How happy they were!
段落	续写第二段
开头	The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
梗概	The twins’ mother was surprised to see the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her. She was deeply moved by her children.

Step 4:丰富语言,前后呼应,创满分作文。

考场满分作文

评卷老师点评

As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.①Father’s appearing was like a savior to the two children.②Under the guidance of their father, they took positive action and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire,③which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready.④How happy they were!

The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.⑤When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised.⑥It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn’t expect. The children said loudly,⑦“Happy Mother’s Day! ”⑧Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.

①过渡自然流畅。

②时态、语境和前文相互照应。

③使用高分句式。

④使用高分句式。

⑤使用高分句式。

⑥使用并列结构。

⑦使用直接引语生动真实。

⑧动作及情感表达真实细腻。

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