2024年春季开学,做一个新尝试,使用公众号记录每节课的上课内容。主要是作为我的上课整理和反思,学生可以作为复习材料翻看。
今天主要是讲评26期周报应用文+课文P15内容
Part 1 Translation
先是抽查学生背诵句子情况。
Part 2 作文讲评
优秀高考英语作文的六个基本特征:
1、层次不乱(按点分段)
2、句式多变(简单句、复合句、感叹句、被动句)
3、亮点若干(词汇如副词\形容词\动词、句型如定语从句,介词短语,非谓语doing\done\to do,倒装,强调,套话开头或结尾句式,not only .. but also..)
4、巧妙串联(过渡、转折、总结、衔接)
5、蠢错不犯(三单、过去式、一个谓语、情态动词/助动词后接动词原来、an/a、介词后接名词或动名词)
6、整洁卷面(书写工整、少涂改)
问题:
1、没有抄写上次的范文【或者写错了本子】
2、an exchange student ;an opportunity
3、agree my application
4、take my application into consideration
5、wanting, enroll, recruit, needing,
参考范文:
Dear Judy,
I'm writing to express my strong interest in enrolling in the handcraft club. / be interested in
As a student always fascinated(非谓语)by the beauty of handmade crafts, I believe the club would provide an opportunity for me to explore my artistic skills and learn from fellow students who share a similar enthusiasm[like-minded people 意见相同的,想法一致的;兴趣相投的 Great minds think alike!英雄所见略同!].
Moreover/Besides/What's more, I have gained experience in different forms of art such as paper cutting, calligraphy, and traditional Chinese knotting(中国结). I am eager to share my knowledge of Chinese arts and crafts.
I would be grateful for a chance to contribute to the artistic atmosphere at our school. /I will appreciate it if you take me into consideration.
Sincerely, Li Hua
Part 3 课文讲评
1. 这一回报使我们更有可能继续这一循环,从而形成了依赖不健康零食这不良习惯。
2. 除了改变不良习惯之外,我们还可以利用习惯循环来养成良好的习惯。
3. 正如中国哲学家老子所说, :“千里之行,始于足下。"
4. 为了实现改变这一目标,一个人必须展示出一定程度的自制力,不断地出许多小步。
5. 毕竟,戒除不良习惯并非易事。
reward,circle,rely on =depend on
aside from ,except, apart from , create
As sb said/wrote, As an old saying goes, As we all know=As it is known to us all, As is reported,
reach=realize, discipline, repeatedly=continously
Part 4 国际妇女节双语介绍
Part 5 Homework
5.1 26期周报第一版,如何写英语通知。
5.2 一篇读后续写
5.3 周末完成口语练习内容
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