一篇语言超级丰富的读后续写（被困电梯）

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题目选自2024T8第二次联考（2024届高三第二次学业质量评价（T8联考）于2024年3月20日开考）

斜体为从句，蓝色为好的表达，黄色为非谓语动词，红色为三连动

When we were finally dismissed from the last class of the day, the students streamed out of the classrooms. It was another boring day after school. I dragged my feet home as I sighed. Yet another uneventful day, I thought. Little did I know（倒装） that the day would take a turn for the worse.

The lift lobby (电梯间) of my flat was old and dirty. The walls, which were painted white, had been dirtied over many years. I reached my flat’s lobby, and pressed the lift button and went in. Just then, Mrs Lim, my elderly neighbour, hobbled (蹒跚) in. She looked ancient with tissue paper white hair, wearing a faded old-fashioned dress. I held the lift door open, flashing a friendly smile, and politely greeted her. I asked her how she felt that day and pressed the buttons. She thanked me for being so polite, then we were silent for the rest of the ride （并列句）.

The lift fell down increasingly fast. There were loud clanking sounds here and there while the lift grew slower and slower. My heart beat hard and fast as my hands turned cold and wet with sweat. Unfortunately, the lift came to an abrupt stop at the fifth floor. I pressed the buttons hard several times, but it was of no help（并列句）. The lights on the buttons had gone out. It soon dawned on me that we were trapped. An icy fear crept up my spine. Mrs Lim was hysterical (歇斯底里).

“We will never get out!” she cried with her face pale. It had become a colourless mask. I had no time to lose. I pressed the bell in the lift immediately. The sound was surely deafening, but what other choice did I have（并列句）? Mrs Lim burst into tears. I tried my very best to comfort her, telling her that everything would be all right and that we needed to find out how to get out safely. Mrs Lim began having trouble breathing, and I immediately helped her sit down and loosened her collar（并列句）.

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Several minutes passed, but no help came.

Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door. ______________________

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Several minutes passed, but no help came. The air-conditioning had died out, and the lift became really stuffy(闷热的). We were sweating buckets (大汗淋漓）. We tried to ring the emergency alarm again. Every second that passed was painful “Help!!!”. I screamed at the top of my lungs, trying to get someone's attention. A wave of despair washed over me. I felt like we would never make it. In one last effort, I tried banging on the doors. The next few minutes felt like hours as we waited in complete silence.

Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door. Help was finally here! The brave firefighters hit the doors open using their tools. It felt like a hundred pound weight was lifted off me, and Mrs. Lim thanked the heavens that someone had come to our rescue. I made a sigh of relief when the doors were finally opened and all this drama was over. The firefighter praised me for helping Mrs. Lim. I returned their praise with gratitude and Mrs. Lim thanked me and even gave me a hug.

几分钟过去了，但没有人来帮忙。空调坏了，电梯变得很闷。我们汗流浃背。我们试着再次拉响紧急警报。过去的每一秒都是痛苦的“救命！！！”。我声嘶力竭地尖叫，试图引起别人的注意。绝望的浪潮席卷了我。我觉得我们永远都活不下去了。在最后一次努力中，我试着敲门。接下来的几分钟感觉就像是几个小时，我们在完全沉默中等待。

当我听到消防队员在电梯门的另一边时，我的希望来了。救援终于来了！勇敢的消防队员用他们的工具把门撞开。感觉就像一百磅的重量从我身上卸了下来。林感谢上帝有人来救我们。当门终于打开，这一切戏剧结束时，我松了一口气。消防员称赞我帮助了林太太。我对他们的赞扬报以感激之情，林太太对我表示感谢，甚至还拥抱了我。

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